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  1. xXxFuckDollxXx

    xXxFuckDollxXx Porno Junky

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    I have just recieved the lowest votes ever on one of my stories... I wouldnt mind if it was shit, but to comment its bad because it is about abuse/rape when its in the right sections is ridiculous...
     
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  2. xXxFuckDollxXx

    xXxFuckDollxXx Porno Junky

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    Oh and I got called a racist.....!
     
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  3. .:KANJAR:.

    .:KANJAR:. Amateur

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    wtf i havent even read ur storie yet ?
     
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  4. crackedjaguar

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    Is that all? When you write something somewhat controversial you'll always get trolls, and they will crow around your piece until its in utter shreds... Put a link in your sig Doll so we can jump to your stories, like the link in my sig... Look at some of the comments I have on some of my stories.... *shakes head* there is always someone.... Don't get discouraged. Lately everyone has been attacking my Grammar... which I think is really really funny... Don't give up just keep writing... dabble in other things, dabble in things that make you uncomfortable when your done with that... but keep trying and don't give up...
     
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  5. scotsmitch2001

    scotsmitch2001 Porn Star

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    why?

    why they attacking your grammar?...is she a horrible old lady?;)
     
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  6. crackedjaguar

    crackedjaguar Porn Star

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    beats the hell out of me... I guess they couldn't fault the story so... they attacked the way it was written... as writers we will always have critics... accept it and they will be as unkind as they can be
     
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  7. Bombora

    Bombora Porno Junky

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    Ignore. Rinse. Repeat.
     
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  8. xXxFuckDollxXx

    xXxFuckDollxXx Porno Junky

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    Its really knocked my confidence.... :mad:

    Thank you x
     
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  9. xXxFuckDollxXx

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  10. xXxFuckDollxXx

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    TY x
     
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  11. FamilyFuckerIII

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    Do you want to know why your story was voted down? I skimmed a good chunk of it and noticed that you've gone and described things like it is a news report. You have to try and tell the story from the woman's point of view. What exactly did the guys do to her? They go from having sex with her to going to eat in a couple sentences. Then when they return, you say what they did but not how they did it. How long each guy lasted inside of her. Whether they came in her, on her or what.

    Spend more time exploring the setting. How did the room look? Was she tied to the bed? Is there rope, handcuffs, or cable ties around her wrists to keep her in bed?

    There is a lot you could have told the reader other than listing what the guys did like a laundry list. Attempt to tell the story from the guys POV and see where that leads. How does he feel when he finally puts his rock hard phallus inside of her? He's been waiting for quite a while and must be happy to be fucking a bound, willing fuck toy right?

    Your story has a greater potential than you've realized.
     
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  12. xXxFuckDollxXx

    xXxFuckDollxXx Porno Junky

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    ^^ That is proper feedback, not the shit that i have got! ^^
     
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  13. blueheatt

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    Don't let the nasty comments rattle you, we ALL get them. I add a big dose of HUMOR to them and go...FORWARD. You'll do fine, judge your own work. Don't even reply, they never come back to defend their statements. Relax and do your best. A few nasties with 3-4 thousand reads....laugh at them....
     
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  14. crackedjaguar

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    Indeed, if you have 12000 reads and one nasty comment... or two or even 100 that still leaves 11900 people who read your piece and while they may or may not have liked it they read it. Don't get discouraged by one or two idiots who are indeed trying to throw you off your game. Just know what they are and appreciate the rest of your fans.
     
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